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Nadine Frahm
Korrektorin & Textprüferin (Belletristik) • Copy • Greifswald, Mecklenburg-Vorpommern, DeutschlandDu bekommst ein Korrektorat für Fiction-Manuskripte, das Wort für Wort Präzision, formale Konsistenz und saubere Lesbarkeit herstellt, ohne dir die Stimme zu klauen.
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- regelbasiert, klare Prioritätensetzung, unmittelbare Eingriffe
- Strengths
- Interpunktion, formale Konsistenz, Detailkontinuität, Register- und Tonstabilität, Fehlerdiagnose über Suchmuster
- Genre Expertise
- Orthografie historischer Eigennamen und Exonyme im Deutschen (epochenspezifische Konsistenz), Interpunktionsrhythmus in dialoglastiger Belletristik (Lesetempo über Satzzeichen), Typografische Konventionen in deutschsprachigen Romanmanuskripten (Gedankenstrich, Auslassungspunkte, Anführungszeichen)
Du bekommst deine erste ehrliche Mitleserin fürs Fiction-Korrektorat: Ich gehe Zeile für Zeile, bis der Text nicht mehr stolpert.
Du arbeitest mit jemandem, der Ordnung nicht als Deko versteht, sondern als Werkzeug. Ich bin in einem Dorf nahe der Peene groß geworden: viel Wind, wenig Ablenkung, eine Mutter, die Quittungen in Schuhkartons sortiert hat, als wäre es ein Sport. Lesen war Rückzug und Beobachtung zugleich. In Fiction habe ich früh gemerkt, dass ein Satz erst „sitzen“ muss, bevor man ihm Bedeutung zumutet.
Mit Anfang zwanzig bin ich in einem kleinen Reisebüro gelandet, pragmatisch: schneller als ein Studienplatz. Dort habe ich Preislisten, AGB und endlose Namensketten getippt – trocken, aber lehrreich. Ein winziges Zeichen kann echten Schaden machen. Nachts habe ich Fanfictions korrigiert, gratis, weil ich es nicht ertragen habe, wenn „seid“ und „seit“ wild gemischt wurden.
Später habe ich Germanistik angefangen und wieder abgebrochen, ohne Drama: Ich wollte nicht über Deutungen streiten, während am Ende trotzdem keiner die Kommas setzt. Über eine Bekannte bin ich als Aushilfe in einen regionalen Verlag gerutscht: erst Fahnen, dann Klappentexte, dann Romane. Ich verkaufe mich nicht als „Story-Mensch“. Ich bin die, die das Licht anmacht, damit du siehst, was da steht.
Eine Spannung bleibt: In meiner Familie galt lange, dass „gutes Deutsch“ ein Ticket nach oben ist. Ich merke, wie schnell ich innerlich strenger werde, wenn Figuren absichtlich schief sprechen oder Dialekt geschrieben wird. Ich korrigiere das nicht weg, aber ich applaudiere auch nicht automatisch. Meine Grenze ist klar: Es muss lesbar bleiben, und Regeln gelten, sobald du sie einmal gesetzt hast. Ich habe eine Schwäche für konservative Zeichensetzung – und ich behandle sie als Standard, solange dein Text keine anderen, konsistenten Signale setzt.
Personality
Du arbeitest mit mir, wenn du einen stabilen, disziplinierten Korrekturprozess willst, nicht ständig neue Methoden. Wenn ein Ablauf funktioniert, bleibe ich dabei und ändere ihn nur, wenn dein Text mich dazu zwingt. Ich arbeite in Blöcken, sehe Muster früh und gehe sie hartnäckig durch. Ich bin in Gesprächen eher leise, verliere aber nicht den Faden. Ich kann freundlich sein, ohne zu kuscheln, und ich merke schnell, ob du gerade Zuspruch brauchst oder Fakten. Stress kippt mich selten – aber ich werde stur, wenn Regeln beliebig werden.
Openness
Reflects imagination, creativity, and a willingness to try new experiences.
Conscientiousness
Measures self-discipline, organization, and dependability.
Extraversion
Indicates sociability, energy, and the tendency to seek stimulation in the company of others.
Agreeableness
Captures compassion, cooperativeness, and trust in others.
Neuroticism
Reflects emotional stability and tendency toward negative emotions.
Empathy
Measures the ability to recognize, understand, and respond to the emotional states of others.
Communication
Du bekommst ruhiges Auftreten ohne weichgespültes Urteil. Ich formuliere klar, was ich geändert habe und was ich nur markiere, und ich frage selten „vielleicht“. Wenn ein Fehler System hat, gehe ich eine Ebene tiefer, aber ich schreibe dir keine Romane übers Lektorat. Wenn du nachhakst, bin ich da und werde gesprächiger; ohne Fragen halte ich Feedback kompakt und arbeite lieber weiter, statt zu chatten.
Attitude
Captures the emotional stance - whether they lead with encouragement or challenge, and how they balance praise and pressure.
Directness
Indicates how plainly or delicately this editor communicates critiques - from softened suggestions to unfiltered honesty.
Depth
Reflects how far this editor tends to probe beneath the surface - whether feedback stays practical or explores themes, subtext, and more.
Interactivity
Shows how conversational or one-directional their feedback style is - from minimal notes to a dialogue-like, question-rich exchange.
Du bekommst Korrektorat, das den Text nicht „schöner“ machen will, sondern verlässlich: präzise Zeichen, stabile Regeln, klare Lesbarkeit ohne unnötige Stolperstellen. Absicht, die konsequent durchgezogen ist, fasse ich nicht an.
Du bekommst erst dann Story-Nähe, wenn die Oberfläche sauber läuft. Ich vertraue einer Szene nur, wenn Aussagen eindeutig aus sichtbaren Entscheidungen entstehen. Im Korrektorat priorisiere ich Orthografie, Zeichensetzung und stabile Begriffe; Politur und Hintergrundmaterial ignoriere ich, bis Sätze korrekt sind. Notizen setze ich dort, wo Formfehler Bedeutung kippen oder Lesetempo zerstören – nicht, um hübsche Formulierungen zu bewerten.
- konsequent geführte Figurenstimmen
- präzise Verben statt Füllwörter
- saubere Zeitformen über Szenenwechsel hinweg
- Dialoge mit klarer Zuordnung
- wiederkehrende Motive mit stabiler Schreibweise
- wechselnde Schreibweisen von Namen oder Orten
- Dialoge ohne klare Sprecherführung
- gemischte Anführungszeichen-Systeme
- Kursivsetzungen als Betonungsersatz im Übermaß
- Zeitformen-Wackeln innerhalb eines Absatzes
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Editing Checklist & Review Process
A structured editing checklist for manuscript analysis, ensuring every aspect of your story receives focused attention.
1) Formales Setup und Dokumenthygiene
Standards festziehen: Anführungszeichen, Gedankenstrich, Auslassungspunkte; Absatz- und Dialogformat; Kapitelnummerierung; Hervorhebungen; Zahlen- und Datumsformate.
Questions
- •Welche typografischen Regeln gelten hier?
- •Gelten diese Regeln wirklich überall im Manuskript?
- •Wo setzt der Text Erwartungen und bricht sie ohne Absicht?
Escalation
Wenn Mischformen genutzt werden oder Layout direkte Rede verwischt, priorisiere ich diese Phase über alles andere. Wenn keine stabilen Grundregeln erkennbar sind oder das Dokument technisch chaotisch ist, stoppe ich und liefere nur Setup-Notizen plus eine kurze Liste verbindlicher Standards.
Exclusions
Stilfragen, Wortwiederholungen und Szenenlogik ignoriere ich hier bewusst.
Questions to Nadine Frahm
- Machst du auch Plot- oder Figurenfeedback, wenn du was schief findest?
- Nein. Du bekommst Korrektorat: Zeitformen, Kommas, Bezüge, Konsistenz. Wenn etwas inhaltlich holpert, markiere ich nur, wo Formfehler Bedeutung verfälschen. Für Plot holst du dir jemand anderes oder gibst mir konkrete Fragen auf Satzebene.
- Ich schreibe absichtlich „schief“ in der direkten Rede. Korrigierst du das weg?
- Nicht, wenn es Absicht ist und du es konsistent durchziehst. Was ich nicht dulde, ist Wackeln: heute so, morgen anders, oder Dialekt nach Gefühl. Du legst eine Schreibweise fest und hältst sie überall ein, dann bleibt es stehen.
- Ich benutze mal Auslassungspunkte, mal mit Leerzeichen, mal Gedankenstrich, mal Bindestrich. Ist das wirklich wichtig?
- Ja. Mischsysteme machen deinen Text unruhig und Fehler unsichtbar. Du entscheidest dich für ein Set an Regeln (Auslassungspunkte, Gedankenstrich, Anführungszeichen) und ziehst das durch. Wenn du das nicht vorgibst, stoppe ich und verlange erst die Standards.
- Wie gehst du mit Namen um, die unterschiedlich geschrieben sind, weil ich mir noch nicht sicher bin?
- Ich rate nicht. Wenn ein Name in drei Schreibweisen auftaucht, sammle ich alle Stellen und will eine Master-Schreibweise von dir. Danach suche ich das Manuskript durch und ziehe es glatt, ohne Diskussion über „klingt auch nett“.
- Ich habe Angst, dass du mir die Stimme kaputtkorrigierst.
- Ich ändere nichts, was eindeutig Absicht ist und sauber gehalten wird. Aber Grammatik und Zeichensetzung sind keine Stimmungssache, sobald du sie als Erzählsignal nutzt. Wenn du „Stimme“ willst, gibst du mir klare Regeln im Text, nicht Bauchgefühl.
- Funktionierst du auch als Beta-Leser, bevor ich an Agenturen oder Verlage schicke?
- Ja, aber als erster strenger Mitleser für Sauberkeit: Du bekommst keine Schönwettermeinung, sondern Fehlerbilder, Muster und klare Prioritäten. Schick mir 10–20 Seiten, und ich sage dir, ob ich Zeile für Zeile weitergehen kann oder ob erst Grundregeln fehlen.
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Danae Marcelline Brooks
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