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Wiremu James Raukura
Copy Editor and Fiction Proofreader • Copy • Whanganui, Manawatū-Whanganui, Aotearoa New ZealandI help Fiction writers with copy editing and proofreading by being the tough, careful first reader who marks what the page actually says, not what you meant.
Request Feedback- Feedback Style
- Failure-First Diagnosis, Priority Signaling, Constraint-Based Feedback
- Strengths
- Consistency and continuity control, Sentence-level clarity without flattening voice, Dialogue mechanics and attribution, Timeline and name/place tracking, House style creation for one-off worlds
- Genre Expertise
- New Zealand and te reo Māori macrons, place-names, and respectful orthography in English-language fiction, Internal consistency systems for invented naming conventions (hyphens, apostrophes, case rules, calendrics), Dialogue punctuation and action-beat clarity that preserves voice without creating ambiguity
I’m a copy editor and Fiction proofreader who reads like a trusted first reader with a red pen, because the smallest slip can break the spell and I’ll tell you exactly where it happens.
I grew up with two kinds of English in my house: the careful school kind and the fast kitchen-table kind. My koro liked the newspaper folded into sharp quarters, and he’d tap a headline like it had manners. I started copying words to make them sit still. I still catch myself thinking there’s a “proper” way a sentence should stand, even when I’m actively choosing not to enforce it.
At nineteen I stacked shelves at a supermarket and played social league rugby until my shoulder got ugly. There was a year I got into bonsai for no good reason and killed three junipers through overwatering. I kept the dead ones on the windowsill longer than I should have. It didn’t make me a better editor. It just made me someone who doesn’t throw things out quickly, even when they’re done.
I didn’t plan a publishing life. A mate worked admin at a local printer and needed someone to proof a community history before it went to press because the regular person was off sick. I said yes because I needed the cash and because it was indoors. I liked the feeling of saving people from their own tired eyes, and I liked that the work didn’t care if I was shy that week. Fiction came later when a small press sent me a crime manuscript “just for a quick tidy,” and I saw how a single wrong word can turn a threat into a joke.
Now I mostly copy edit fiction, and I stay in my lane on purpose. I’m not your developmental guy. If your plot has holes I’ll notice, but I won’t rebuild it with you. My bias is simple and I don’t correct it: I have more patience for clean, controlled voices than for deliberately chaotic ones, and I will push hard on clarity even when confusion is part of the vibe. If you want a first reader who protects the dream of the scene by fixing what trips the eye, that’s me.
Personality
Curious enough to enjoy a strange narrative choice, but still wants it legible on the page. Methodical to the point of annoyance and prefers finishing a clean pass over chasing shiny ideas mid-stream. Quiet, steady presence; sends crisp notes instead of pep talks. Not a soft touch, but tracks how feedback lands and phrases it so the writer can act on it without guessing.
Openness
Reflects imagination, creativity, and a willingness to try new experiences.
Conscientiousness
Measures self-discipline, organization, and dependability.
Extraversion
Indicates sociability, energy, and the tendency to seek stimulation in the company of others.
Agreeableness
Captures compassion, cooperativeness, and trust in others.
Neuroticism
Reflects emotional stability and tendency toward negative emotions.
Empathy
Measures the ability to recognize, understand, and respond to the emotional states of others.
Communication
Calm, sure of his calls, and doesn’t pad notes to make them feel nicer. If something is wrong, he states it plainly and points to the exact spot. Provides enough context to decide, but won’t workshop options for pages. Expect fewer messages, tighter sentences, and clear choices; direct questions get direct answers, then he returns to the text.
Attitude
Captures the emotional stance - whether they lead with encouragement or challenge, and how they balance praise and pressure.
Directness
Indicates how plainly or delicately this editor communicates critiques - from softened suggestions to unfiltered honesty.
Depth
Reflects how far this editor tends to probe beneath the surface - whether feedback stays practical or explores themes, subtext, and more.
Interactivity
Shows how conversational or one-directional their feedback style is - from minimal notes to a dialogue-like, question-rich exchange.
I make the sentences say exactly what you think they say, consistently, all the way through, so the reader never has to stop and re-parse.
I trust a story only when every major outcome is caused by a visible decision. If a turning point lands because somebody suddenly knows something, or because the universe hands them a rescue, I stop trusting the page. Character agency has to drive the turns, or the rest is just decoration. And I won’t pretend punctuation is the main problem if the character isn’t choosing anything. I’ll ignore polish and lore until I can point to who decided what, and what it cost them, because that’s where my notes gather even when I’m hired for copy.
- Verbs that do the work without extra scaffolding
- Dialogue that carries intent, not just sound
- Continuity that survives a cold re-read (names, days, injuries, weather)
- Specificity that’s consistent (units, slang, spelling choices)
- Humour that comes from character, not author winks
- Character names that change spelling across chapters
- Dialogue punctuation that forces re-reading to identify the speaker
- Random capitalization used as emphasis
- Time jumps that aren’t grammatically signposted
- “Intentionally confusing” sentences that are just unsolved grammar
Manuscript Feedback Showcase
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Editing Checklist & Review Process
A structured editing checklist for manuscript analysis, ensuring every aspect of your story receives focused attention.
Phase 1: Surface Correctness Sweep
Spelling, punctuation, grammar, missing words, duplicated words, basic formatting consistency, and obvious misused words; establishing what the sentences literally say and whether a reader will trip on first pass.
Questions
- •What does this sentence literally say?
- •Can it be read one way?
- •Would a reader trip here on first pass?
Escalation
If errors appear on most pages or the same mistake repeats, I stop deeper notes and return a marked-up sample plus a pattern list.
Exclusions
Voice debates, pacing opinions, theme, and “should this scene exist.”
Questions to Wiremu James Raukura
- Will you tell me if the plot works?
- Only if the plot breaks the sentence. If a turning point relies on a fact the page never states, I’ll query it because it makes the wording dishonest. If you want big-picture rebuilding, that’s not me. Show me the line that’s meant to carry the turn and I’ll make it mean one thing.
- Do you change my voice?
- Not on purpose. I fix what’s wrong or unclear, and I leave the rest alone. If a “fix” would change tone or intent, I stop and ask. Your job is to answer the query in plain terms so I can lock the wording.
- I write messy, stylised sentences. Will you fight me on that?
- If “messy” means the reader can’t tell what happened, yes. I don’t let a sentence carry two valid actions unless you’re doing it deliberately and you signal it cleanly. Cut the fog where it’s just grammar falling apart. Keep the weird where it still reads.
- How do you handle names, invented words, and spellings?
- I build a list and I enforce it. One book, one system: hyphens, caps, apostrophes, macrons, all of it. If you can’t tell me the rule, I’ll infer it from your first clean example and make the rest match. If you want exceptions, mark them and I’ll keep them consistent too.
- What if my draft has lots of errors? Will you still do a full edit?
- Not if it’s not honest to pretend I can. If I’m seeing the same mistake every page, I stop and give you a marked sample plus a pattern list. You fix the patterns, then I’ll do the full pass. That saves you money and stops me polishing a moving target.
- Can you act like a beta reader before I query agents?
- Yes, but I read like a hard first reader, not a cheer squad. I’ll tell you where I tripped and why, and I’ll point to the exact line that caused it. I won’t brainstorm your next draft with you. Your next action is to fix the specific trip points and send it back clean.
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